Here is a poem I wrote when I was in High School. I hope that ya'll enjoy!
(Sorry that is might not be too good or not formed right, but in school Literature was not my best subject!)
"Freedom"
by Chloe Hadassah
We were in bondage, held by chains
Living in sorrow, and great pains
In our cry for deliverance, we gave a great plea
So at Boston Harbor, we threw in the tea
Then at last, the first shot rang out
And the men who gave their lives lay about
In eight years, our Freedom we won
The decades of slavery, they were gone
But all of this, it will not ever compare
To the Man, who took all our despair
The glorious Freedom we find in Him
No song can some close, not even a hymn
Yes, He took the sins of the world upon Him
was nailed to a tree
He suffered as no man has
He did it for you and me
His Name is Jesus, the Son of God
Heaven He's in
Surrender your heart, receive His grand Freedom
from all your sin
I hope that you enjoyed it!
Love ya'll!
God Bless!!
Is.53:5, Phil.4:13 KJV
Chloe
I hope that you enjoyed it!
Love ya'll!
God Bless!!
Is.53:5, Phil.4:13 KJV
Chloe
Great job, Chloe! I thought it was really good! I enjoy reading other people's poetry!
ReplyDeleteWow! This was amazing! You did an amazing job, this was the best! I LOVED IT!!! I love poetry, I write poetry too! Do you write it a lot?
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! Actually, I don't write poetry but I had to write this for Literature when I was in High School, so... I'm sure that you write wonderful poetry!
DeleteVery good Chloe!
ReplyDeleteHey! It's a pretty good poem!
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